it sucks

I agree with the comments about it taking core ideas from jump and push but these days nothing is completely original

i think the way it was filmed was alright but the acting was completely terrible. I realize its a pretty low-budget short film but come on. I wasn’t drawn into the story at all.

sorry

For a low budget film I would say the effects are pretty good, just very unoriginal. There are a lot of great qualities about this film but there are plenty of bad one as well, first off when your writing a script its best to start by writing an outline of beats of the story to establish what is going to happen. This will help decide the best way to visually tell the story with shots, and dialogue. There is a lot of room for grow in your work, you really need to move towards your own ideas.
-CJ

I like the subway shot

nice job

i liked it alootttt

Well wasn’t she a cutie.
Lol.

Great work!

wow man, i really think that this is amazing. idc if you did take stuff from other movies, its the way you put them together. cause its kind of like a hitman like thing and i like that. this is amazing. 100/5 dude. keep makin’ more.

there are somethings i saw and i’m not in film class. like when he says “hi, how are you?” and the one guy says “my name is eric.” i don’t think it would go like that if he just met someone. and um, when people talk when they hold a gun to someone’s head, like in the end; they aren’t thinking about their hands. like, if your talking you are going to be thinking of what you want to say first. so he could have shot the guy when he was talking cause he wouldn’t have shot back. but its still a 100/5

hey man I was hoping to get into filmaking and i have some questions do you think you could help out a beginner